Who are you in the game or who can you be and sometimes it's weird to have this super alien fantasy race that in the end is basically just a normal guy.
Thank you for playing Primal, I'm so glad you like the concept :) Now that you mention it, I can totally see that with the jungle setting and the loincloth hehe!
Yeah, Primal was delisted unfortunately. I disabled donations so that it would be reindexed. Hopefully Itch.io eventually considers rolling back these restrictions. In the meantime, I will continue to work on Primal and post updates:)
Excited to see where this goes! Very happily following now because I'm intrigued by the setting and the characters so far. Love your writing style as well and I'm excited to see more of it, keep up to the good work but take your time and thank you for sharing this project with us!
Thank you for the kind comment <3 I'm so glad you're looking forward to seeing how Primal progresses and that you enjoyed the writing style :) I took a bit of a break after getting sick but I'll be back to writing again soon!
I appreciate the kind words, thank you :) I'm glad you find the premise of Primal interesting so far, it's been a lot of fun to write and explore constructing an Alien culture!
I enjoyed reading this and think it has a lot of potential. One suggestion though, the summary led me to expect an alien, but the aliens don't come off as alien much at all. You might want to add something to manage people's expectations so they don't wind up disappointed, hoping to romance the equivalent of the Predator- though that might just be me, lol. Good luck with your story!
Hi, thanks for taking the time to read Primal and for the heads up! I went back through the blurb and I definitely see how it could give that impression 🙂I don't use the word alien so I'm not sure how to best clarify that Xi'tal is more man than alien, let me know if you have any suggestions 🙂
Thank you <3 Hehe, it will take a while for MC to pick up on the language, but they'll be able to understand a good amount through context clues and body language till they start learning the words themselves :)
Super intriguing premise and I will check it out on PC within the next few days, but as a heads up for now, the game is pretty borked on mobile. I’m assuming the theme you used wasn’t optimized for mobile browsers maybe? Unsure but it’s worth looking into it and trying for yourself as a test!
Oof, I had no idea the formatting was so wonky on mobile! Thanks for letting me know <3 I removed it from mobile compatibility for now till I have time to troubleshoot the issue, I'm not sure why it's doing that. I really appreciate the heads up 😃
Thank you! This is my first time writing something like this, it's been a lot of fun exploring the concept of how to navigate a new world (and new relationship) without words😃
Oh my God, this is incredibly exciting — survival and a romance with an alien! I'm thrilled, I can't wait to see what happens next. Waiting patiently for the continuation!
Thank you!! <3 I'm glad you're liking the genre blend so far :) I couldn't resist when the idea popped into my head! Hoping to have the next chapter out soon :)
Thank you! Alien romance is a new genre for me, but ever since playing I was a Teenage Exocolonist and romancing Sym, I've always wanted to write my own. That game is an absolute masterpiece! <3
Thank you! Their dynamic is different than what I usually write, which is probably why I'm having so much fun playing around with it haha :P I'm glad it's piqued your interest so far!
Thank you, I'm glad the demo peaked your interest :) Future chapters will be a blend of survival action/adventure, primal erotica, and sci-fi exploration as MC is forced to navigate a world and society very different than their own :P I'm going to start on chapter two tonight!
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THIS IS SO GOOOD WHY DID IT END LIKE THAAAAAT!!!!?????
I really like this so far! Can't wait to see more.
love this!!
This is a hidden treasure!! Just absolutely perfect blend of adventure, sci fic and smexy alien- ( ꈍᴗꈍ)💞
I just found this game, because it appeared under the "Otome" tag today. Cheers!
(Thought you may want to know that with the situation of 18+ sexual content games getting brutalized going on - I always sort by "most recent")
Who are you in the game or who can you be and sometimes it's weird to have this super alien fantasy race that in the end is basically just a normal guy.
THIS IS AMAZINGGGGGG PLEASE CONTINUE!!! I BEGGGGG!
WDYM END OF DEMO I WASN'T FINISHEDDD PLEASE DONT ABANDON THIS🙏🏼😭
This was my exact reaction when it just ended. 😭
it's so fun cant wait for an update
very interesting, kinda sad that the demo is very short.
I love this so much!
❤️👍
<3!
Love the concept! It's giving me huge Tarzan and Jane vibes for now, I'm so into it 🙂↕️🙂↕️ looking forward to the next updates!
Thank you for playing Primal, I'm so glad you like the concept :) Now that you mention it, I can totally see that with the jungle setting and the loincloth hehe!
has your game be delisted, too?
Yeah, Primal was delisted unfortunately. I disabled donations so that it would be reindexed. Hopefully Itch.io eventually considers rolling back these restrictions. In the meantime, I will continue to work on Primal and post updates:)
ohhh!!! very interesting, I'm excited to read more ❤️❤️
Thank you for playing Primal, I'm so glad you enjoyed the demo :)
Excited to see where this goes! Very happily following now because I'm intrigued by the setting and the characters so far. Love your writing style as well and I'm excited to see more of it, keep up to the good work but take your time and thank you for sharing this project with us!
Thank you for the kind comment <3 I'm so glad you're looking forward to seeing how Primal progresses and that you enjoyed the writing style :) I took a bit of a break after getting sick but I'll be back to writing again soon!
"A Sci-fi Survival Erotica Roman" - say no more 🤚you have me
So glad you're up for the genre blend in Primal! :)
Interesting ~~~
Thank you! <3
I am really looking forward to where this story goes. I'm already hooked!
Thank you, it makes me so happy to hear that the demo of Primal has you hooked despite the fact that it's still in its early stages :)
Omg I love this so far! I'm really looking forward to more :)
Thank you for playing Primal, I'm so glad you enjoyed the demo!
Thanks for this story.It looks very interesting.Good luck with your writing :)
I appreciate the kind words, thank you :) I'm glad you find the premise of Primal interesting so far, it's been a lot of fun to write and explore constructing an Alien culture!
Patiently waiting for more tee hee :3 Keep up the good work!
Thank you for playing Primal :) I'm so happy you enjoyed the demo!
I enjoyed reading this and think it has a lot of potential. One suggestion though, the summary led me to expect an alien, but the aliens don't come off as alien much at all. You might want to add something to manage people's expectations so they don't wind up disappointed, hoping to romance the equivalent of the Predator- though that might just be me, lol. Good luck with your story!
Hi, thanks for taking the time to read Primal and for the heads up! I went back through the blurb and I definitely see how it could give that impression 🙂I don't use the word alien so I'm not sure how to best clarify that Xi'tal is more man than alien, let me know if you have any suggestions 🙂
You could add a detail about him looking human after his name, or maybe add a separate section where you describe the LI after the summary?
Thanks for the feedback! I will go in and add this now :)
very good I can't wait for more <3! o-o can't wait to know what they are saying lol
Thank you <3 Hehe, it will take a while for MC to pick up on the language, but they'll be able to understand a good amount through context clues and body language till they start learning the words themselves :)
Super intriguing premise and I will check it out on PC within the next few days, but as a heads up for now, the game is pretty borked on mobile. I’m assuming the theme you used wasn’t optimized for mobile browsers maybe? Unsure but it’s worth looking into it and trying for yourself as a test!
Oof, I had no idea the formatting was so wonky on mobile! Thanks for letting me know <3 I removed it from mobile compatibility for now till I have time to troubleshoot the issue, I'm not sure why it's doing that. I really appreciate the heads up 😃
Nice start, excited for more!
Thank you so much <3
Very excited to read more. Really enjoy the theme of having to communicate without words, plus love scifi survival!
Thank you! This is my first time writing something like this, it's been a lot of fun exploring the concept of how to navigate a new world (and new relationship) without words😃
Oh my God, this is incredibly exciting — survival and a romance with an alien! I'm thrilled, I can't wait to see what happens next. Waiting patiently for the continuation!
Thank you!! <3 I'm glad you're liking the genre blend so far :) I couldn't resist when the idea popped into my head! Hoping to have the next chapter out soon :)
WHAT??? I NEED MORE
Hehehe thank you! Hoping to have the next chapter written in the next couple days :)
this is sooo good im so excited
Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it so far <3
thank you for your hard work ⭐️🩷
Oh, I love love it! Really looking forward for more ☺️
Thank you! I'm hoping to set aside some time to work on the next chapter today if all goes according to plan :)
Sounds interesting for sure! Cant wait to play more 🙏
Thank you <3 Hoping to have the next chapter out soon!
I love this concept so much! Consider my interest piqued :D
I'm glad you like the concept!! This one is gonna be so much fun to write :)
Hell yeah Im interested! Im excited to see more, explore more. Do take however much time you need, I do love an alien romance
Thank you! Alien romance is a new genre for me, but ever since playing I was a Teenage Exocolonist and romancing Sym, I've always wanted to write my own. That game is an absolute masterpiece! <3
Just the IF I'm looking for lmao I really like silverbound too so I'm glad you're working on them both can't wait to read more.
Hehe thank you <3 Silverbound will be my priority and Primal will be my side project :) I'm happy to hear you're enjoying them both!
i am looking respectfully. great start! looking forward to more!
I'm glad you're enjoying the start so far! <3 I appreciate the kind comment!
Very intriguing, can't wait to read more!
Thank you! Hoping to post the next chapter soon :)
I am very looking forward to your progress.
Glad you're looking forward to more progress :) Hoping to have the next part out soon!
the premise and their dynamic piqued my interest 👀 I hope to see more of it!
Thank you! Their dynamic is different than what I usually write, which is probably why I'm having so much fun playing around with it haha :P I'm glad it's piqued your interest so far!
interest has been gauged :3 so excited for what this may be
Thank you, I'm glad the demo peaked your interest :) Future chapters will be a blend of survival action/adventure, primal erotica, and sci-fi exploration as MC is forced to navigate a world and society very different than their own :P I'm going to start on chapter two tonight!