*gnaws at the bars of my enclosure* Im gonna love this story, oh I cant wait to throw down with Prophet, get into Zander's business till he's honestly shares why he's distant, reunite with Hayden, and explore a romance with Jax! I love what has been written and looking forward for more
🤣🤣🤣 This made me laugh so hard! The enemies-to-lovers arc with Prophet will definitely be delicious😄 As will reuniting with Hayden (so excited to write this part!), uncovering the truth behind his "death", and discovering the secrets Jax and Zander are hiding from MC :P
"Good. Let's suit up then." That's all The Templar says before turning and stepping into the nearby building that houses the radioactive suits.
You let out a harsh breath. The trip to The Outpost and back will take just shy of a week. If The Marked Ones or the elements don't kill The Templar, you might just do the job yourself.
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There is no continuation nor sign that the demo is over.
Hey! Sorry about that, amateur here. I forgot to include something denoting that was the end of the chapter. It's not a glitch, that's where chapter 1 ends. Sorry for the confusion! In the next update I'll make sure to go back and add this, thanks!
I really love the writing in this; it sets up the world in a believable and interesting way! I love how the ROs are introduced too, like there’s already something deeper to them that we should be exploring.
My personality was Whisper in the Sands! The little blurb about it is super cool. I’m tempted to implement some sort of personality system in my games now too.
Hi! Thank you for the kind comment, I really appreciate the feedback! Sometimes writing feels a bit like wandering around in the dark, and getting feedback really helps me to know what's working and what I need to change.
Hehe the personality part was one of the funnest bits to implement so I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm definitely going to have to check out your game Make Me! Dynamic protagonist +terrible vampire puns is a definite win in my book!
oh gee thanks :’D I’ve been quietly hacking away at it, so here’s hoping I can expand on the demo soonish. And believe me, you WILL experience so many more vampire puns hahah
You should be extremely proud of what you have made. It teases enough of the world to let you know that this is going to be bleak. Also the possibility that each romance will have angst to some degree is the cherry on top of the “this will hurt so good” cake.
I can not wait to see how this all unfolds.
Your writing is so good and I’m so thankful to have found this.
Love this! I love post-apocalyptic scenarios and throwing in romance there makes it even better. I think the personality system is an awesome feature, and I am excited to see where this goes with the different romance options.
One comment: this could probably benefit from a bit of editing as I spotted a few typos and grammatical errors- nothing game breaking though! If you are looking for an editor, let me know. Either way, looking forward to next chapter!
Hi, I'm glad you're enjoying SilverBound so far! I am definitely looking for an editor for this! I'm very new to developing my own games, so I'm still trying to figure out a lot of the ins and outs of this haha. I did notice a few typos even on the intro page that I'd missed initially so you're right, it could definitely benefit from an extra set of eyes!
I'd be happy to proofread/beta read for you if you're looking for support! I'm trying to get more involved as an editor and writer of these games and learning the ropes myself 😁 shoot me an email if you're interested now or in the future!
We'll both be learning together then :) I love the writing aspect, but I don't know how you editors do it! So much attention to detail haha. Thank you, I will send you an email once I finish the next chapter! Ch2 is still in the works, but I don't anticipate it taking too long!
Thank you for taking the time to play SilverBound! The "Blade of Tempered Steel" personality is one of my favorites :) I'm glad you're enjoying the game so far!!
Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed the first chapter of SilverBound! <3 I'm working on the next chapter now so hopefully it won't be too long before another update!
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LOVE THIS SO MUCH IM SO EXCITED!!!!!!!!!!
I already hate the templars, let Jax breed me! 😭😭
All the ROs are so interesting, I'm definitely going to romance everyone
*gnaws at the bars of my enclosure* Im gonna love this story, oh I cant wait to throw down with Prophet, get into Zander's business till he's honestly shares why he's distant, reunite with Hayden, and explore a romance with Jax! I love what has been written and looking forward for more
🤣🤣🤣 This made me laugh so hard! The enemies-to-lovers arc with Prophet will definitely be delicious😄 As will reuniting with Hayden (so excited to write this part!), uncovering the truth behind his "death", and discovering the secrets Jax and Zander are hiding from MC :P
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"Good. Let's suit up then." That's all The Templar says before turning and stepping into the nearby building that houses the radioactive suits.
You let out a harsh breath. The trip to The Outpost and back will take just shy of a week. If The Marked Ones or the elements don't kill The Templar, you might just do the job yourself.
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There is no continuation nor sign that the demo is over.
Oh yeah mine is doing that too I figured that's all they wrote :/
That is where it ends, sorry for the confusion! I'll make sure to go back and add something denoting it's the end of the chapter in the next update.
Hey! Sorry about that, amateur here. I forgot to include something denoting that was the end of the chapter. It's not a glitch, that's where chapter 1 ends. Sorry for the confusion! In the next update I'll make sure to go back and add this, thanks!
I really love the writing in this; it sets up the world in a believable and interesting way! I love how the ROs are introduced too, like there’s already something deeper to them that we should be exploring.
My personality was Whisper in the Sands! The little blurb about it is super cool. I’m tempted to implement some sort of personality system in my games now too.
Keep developing!! I would love to see more.
Hi! Thank you for the kind comment, I really appreciate the feedback! Sometimes writing feels a bit like wandering around in the dark, and getting feedback really helps me to know what's working and what I need to change.
Hehe the personality part was one of the funnest bits to implement so I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm definitely going to have to check out your game Make Me! Dynamic protagonist +terrible vampire puns is a definite win in my book!
oh gee thanks :’D I’ve been quietly hacking away at it, so here’s hoping I can expand on the demo soonish. And believe me, you WILL experience so many more vampire puns hahah
I’m hooked and I can not wait for more. I’m actually amazed at how quickly this pulled me in and left me wanting more. Amazing work you’ve done!
Thank you so much, this comment made me smile! I wasn't sure whether the first chapter hit the mark or fell flat, so I really appreciate it!
You should be extremely proud of what you have made. It teases enough of the world to let you know that this is going to be bleak. Also the possibility that each romance will have angst to some degree is the cherry on top of the “this will hurt so good” cake.
I can not wait to see how this all unfolds.
Your writing is so good and I’m so thankful to have found this.
<3<3<3
I'm so glad you're enjoying the story so far! Hoping to have the next chapter out soon :)
Love this! I love post-apocalyptic scenarios and throwing in romance there makes it even better. I think the personality system is an awesome feature, and I am excited to see where this goes with the different romance options.
One comment: this could probably benefit from a bit of editing as I spotted a few typos and grammatical errors- nothing game breaking though! If you are looking for an editor, let me know. Either way, looking forward to next chapter!
Hi, I'm glad you're enjoying SilverBound so far! I am definitely looking for an editor for this! I'm very new to developing my own games, so I'm still trying to figure out a lot of the ins and outs of this haha. I did notice a few typos even on the intro page that I'd missed initially so you're right, it could definitely benefit from an extra set of eyes!
I'd be happy to proofread/beta read for you if you're looking for support! I'm trying to get more involved as an editor and writer of these games and learning the ropes myself 😁 shoot me an email if you're interested now or in the future!
We'll both be learning together then :) I love the writing aspect, but I don't know how you editors do it! So much attention to detail haha. Thank you, I will send you an email once I finish the next chapter! Ch2 is still in the works, but I don't anticipate it taking too long!
This is absolutely amazing, I got the personality 'Blade of Tempered Steel'
Thank you for taking the time to play SilverBound! The "Blade of Tempered Steel" personality is one of my favorites :) I'm glad you're enjoying the game so far!!
first chapter was really good, amazing work<3
Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed the first chapter of SilverBound! <3 I'm working on the next chapter now so hopefully it won't be too long before another update!